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Across the sand,
The golden sand,
An abyss stretches out.
Though calm and saphire now, beckoning though they are,
Never trust the turning tide.
When the blanket of night wraps around the sky,
And the claws of darkness rake rhe earth,
The ocean stirs.
When the stormclouds gather,
And the lightning strikes,
The ocean stirs.
Slowly, steadily, it begins to awaken,
Tossing and turning in a frenzy of brine.
Boats overturned, fish swept away,
A death-trap, nothing less.
An uproar, not present before,
Bellowing and roaring,
Fighting the deep rumbling of thunder.
A blue beast, a monstrous creature,
Disguised as a welcoming pool by day.
And, as the uproar and night ends, so does my tale,
And always remember this.
Yes, the ocean is a wonderous creature, but beware its beast form.
NEVER TRUST THE TURNING TIDE.
©2008-2009 ~EternalDragonRider
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This is a short poem about the true destructive power of the ocean. I hope you like it. There's nothing much I can tell you about this piece, just take heed:
NEVER TRUST THE TURNING TIDE!

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:iconlonewolfshadowuchiha:
wow thats very deep and very good, and lol your very much right about the tide, we went on a cruise in march in barbados round the carribean and of course the last night there there was a storm this boat was huge yet it felt like it was going to capsize any minute it was scary, not to mention quite gut wrenching, as of now i hate the sea =D
but great poem, its realy well detailed :)

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Thanks alot! Wow, that must have been scary! I know a lot of ppl with bad experiences of the waves, so I wanted to warn ppl about it.

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it is great Chloe just keep beleiving in yourself you are a better writer than you think!
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*sniff* thankyou...

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:iconunderwaterangel96:
u soft person!

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